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Proper English, grammar, and spelling examplesEdit

We at TF2 Informer want to have one of the best readable articles with clean sentences; instead of choppy ones. Here's what I mean.

Soldier Rocket-jumping ExampleEdit

Bad:


"When teh Soldier hitz hiz own rocketz below hiz feetz, he can propel upwardz"


What's wrong with this sentence? I'll point out.

  • The sentence makes no sense, poor grammar.
  • The writer misspelled "the" wrong, making it "teh".
  • The writer replaced the 's' at the end of words.
  • The writer puts 'a lot' instead of 'a lot'. According to the online computer dictationary and real life dictionary, a lot is not a valid word, nor should it be used on here.


Good:

"When the Soldier hits his own rockets below his feet, he can propel upward."


What's good with this sentence? I'll point out.

  • Described cause-effect (Cause: Soldier hits his own rockets below his feet / Effect: Propels up)
  • Correct punctuation, grammar, and spelling


Excellent:


"When the Soldier hits his own rockets below his feet, he can propel upward. This method is known as rocket-jumping."


What's so excellent about this paragraph? I'll point it out for you.

  • Added links to the Soldier class incase the reader is interested in the Soldier class
  • Tells the reader what the common method is called

Heavy Intelligence (In Meet the Heavy) ExampleEdit

Bad:


"Peoplez think they outsmartz me. Maybe, [sniffz], maybe. But I have yet onez to meet that outsmartz bullets"


Source: This line comes from the Team Fortress 2 first Meet the Team, "Meet the Heavy".

Quality:

  • Very not understandable; hard to read
  • Writer places too many 'z'.
  • Writer places 'But' as a first word in a sentence. According to grammar, this would be incorrect.


Good:


"People think they can outsmart me. Maybe, [sniffs] maybe. I have yet one to meet that outsmart bullets."


Quality:

  • Better and easier to read
  • The last part (outsmart bullet) is still not understandable, but could be corrected or through methods of the reader.
  • No 'But' in front of a sentence that serves as a first word.


Excellent:


"People think they can outsmart me. Maybe [sniffs], maybe. I have yet to meet one that can outsmart bullets."

- The Heavy on intelligence, SOURCE: Meet the Heavy


Quality:

  • Provides who said it and the topic
  • Shows the source
  • Line is not as accurate, but still is acceptable
  • Easiest to read, nice flow with grammar and spelling.

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